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Anonymous
3/13/21, 2:16 PM
I was hoping to see Preppy enslaved this chapter but that was hot.
bimarguy
3/13/21, 12:57 PM
great addition , this is how i saw the ending go, a win win for KOK and Jeff , would be nice to see him accept offer and find out his dad was behind it
3/13/21, 9:45 AM
More casual wishes, more changes!
3/13/21, 9:41 AM
Interesting developments.
3/13/21, 9:09 AM
awesome story. loved every part if it. well done.
3/13/21, 8:55 AM
[@BenWolf99](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1171954) - Thank you :) I think we can safely say Riley won't buy his own ring. That said, the newest chapter just went up, and Riley has been doing something scheming. [@Hypnoguy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/908028) - Thanks man! I'm posting 'em as fast as I write 'em, so hopefully they'll all come smoothly. [@MonsterMash62](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/3332) - Thank you! I think it's hard to keep sex interesting chapter after chapter. Obviously it's going to be part of it, but if there's no plot to move it along, I have trouble enjoying the writing. Regarding Riley, I didn't realize he was going to be anything but a minor character. He sort of jumped off the page and started writing his own story. [@JockPupTraxxx](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/26244) - Thank ye' sir! I think there are nine chapters total, assuming the plot I've got sketched goes well. I think you're in for a ride. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Thanks! I wasn't planning on giving any details around Tanner and Smith's night with Marc, but I put in a few lines at the start of the next chapter just for you. In fact, you might find some fallout from Riley's decision there too. @anon - Thank you! [@hivemindlover](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1644947) - Thanks bud! I'm really glad to see the words flowing again soon, I had a wicked case of writers block for a couple months.
3/13/21, 8:40 AM
Great addition to the series! I like your writing, especially as a first time author. I look forward to your ideas moving forwards. Your version of Biff is also pretty hot indeed.
Anonymous
3/13/21, 8:38 AM
Wonderful!!