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3/13/21, 9:09 AM
awesome story. loved every part if it. well done.
3/13/21, 8:55 AM
[@BenWolf99](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1171954) - Thank you :) I think we can safely say Riley won't buy his own ring. That said, the newest chapter just went up, and Riley has been doing something scheming. [@Hypnoguy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/908028) - Thanks man! I'm posting 'em as fast as I write 'em, so hopefully they'll all come smoothly. [@MonsterMash62](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/3332) - Thank you! I think it's hard to keep sex interesting chapter after chapter. Obviously it's going to be part of it, but if there's no plot to move it along, I have trouble enjoying the writing. Regarding Riley, I didn't realize he was going to be anything but a minor character. He sort of jumped off the page and started writing his own story. [@JockPupTraxxx](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/26244) - Thank ye' sir! I think there are nine chapters total, assuming the plot I've got sketched goes well. I think you're in for a ride. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Thanks! I wasn't planning on giving any details around Tanner and Smith's night with Marc, but I put in a few lines at the start of the next chapter just for you. In fact, you might find some fallout from Riley's decision there too. @anon - Thank you! [@hivemindlover](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1644947) - Thanks bud! I'm really glad to see the words flowing again soon, I had a wicked case of writers block for a couple months.
3/13/21, 8:40 AM
Great addition to the series! I like your writing, especially as a first time author. I look forward to your ideas moving forwards. Your version of Biff is also pretty hot indeed.
Anonymous
3/13/21, 8:38 AM
Wonderful!!
3/13/21, 7:54 AM
Hahaha lovely way to make the splinter turn the dinner wish ;) also, ‘Ryan chuckled. “That feels like a waste of a wish.”’ Does this mean Ryan is aware?
Anonymous
3/13/21, 4:40 AM
I'm so hard I can't think. Great story!! The whole series has been incredible!!!!! Can't wait to see how he gets pimped out as Master's prostitute!
Anonymous
3/13/21, 4:19 AM
this is so hot are we going to see more chapters?
3/13/21, 2:10 AM
Thank you for the compliments. I really apprecaite it. @little tiny tim, I have the other two parts in my head and know exactly where they will go. It's just a matter of writing them down. :) @slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Tell me about it! LOL! I wanted to create a character with a rich history I could go back to. Rabbit, from my Bimbear series is mysterous, he could have just appeared or he might have been around for thousands of years. I wanted to base Amir somewhat in reality but with a past that I could delve into, if I wanted.
3/12/21, 11:10 PM
Love sissy stories & can't wait for the second part !!!