Recent Comments

fry
2/6/25, 3:52 AM
Any chance there will be more chapters?
2/6/25, 12:50 AM
Great chapter! Some lovely bonding; it was touching throughout! Can't wait to see where you go from here :D

2/6/25, 3:45 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thank you so much! Looking forward to your next chapter as well!
Anonymous
2/6/25, 3:07 AM
Are you still around, Brian?
Anonymous
7/9/24, 8:40 AM
Loved this story. You write it from another point of view, or even a sequel where we get to see the kinds of stuff they make him do. Either way it was a huge tease (in a good way). There's so much you could explore.

2/6/25, 2:47 AM
@Anonymous I am glad you liked it! I was thinking of revisiting this story, so keep your eyes peeled :laughing:
7/6/24, 9:18 PM
Fantastic!

2/6/25, 2:46 AM
@[oraclex](/user/show/1854041) I am glad you liked it! :smiley:
Anonymous
7/1/24, 7:22 PM
Great writing and story line, this too should be a video! I'd follow the watch too!

2/6/25, 2:46 AM
@Anonymous :woozy_face: I think all of us would...
Anonymous
7/1/24, 6:54 PM
You could also do a story from Elliot's point of view from Dan's trance.

2/6/25, 2:46 AM
@Anonymous I was just thinking about revisiting this story, I just might :eyes:
Anonymous
6/30/24, 2:29 PM
There can be more chapter of this story. It's hot.

2/6/25, 2:45 AM
@Anonymous I am so glad you enjoyed it :smile:
Jan 16, 2025
1/16/25, 8:59 PM
This is FUN! I am looking forward to more!

2/6/25, 2:45 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I am glad you enjoyed it :smile: I am not sure I am moving forward with this as a series, because I tend to enjoy writing continuous stories much more. But we'll see! :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
Anonymous
9/17/24, 1:13 AM
good written ,expecting to read more twist stories

2/6/25, 2:44 AM
@Anonymous I got you covered with nice twists, trust me!