Recent Comments

3/12/21, 1:13 PM
Really enjoying your new series, Derek! I look forward to future chapters.
3/12/21, 12:11 PM
need to know more on how this ends....
3/12/21, 11:54 AM
Really looking forward to him getting his brother's. THe father's transformation has been awesome!
3/12/21, 11:12 AM
Hey, I love this story 😍 Can't wait to see what will happen next 😍 I would love it if riley would buy himself a ring or steal the ring from marc and using it against him(marc). But this is just an idea of mine, can't wait for the next part of the story. Keep up the amazing work ☺️
3/12/21, 7:24 AM
Nice, And I love the to know how everything changed for the people around him and if they are aware of it. BTW did his sons inherent his biological anomaly?
3/12/21, 6:38 AM
Not much hypnosis of the.hero going on and a lot of torture. is that going to change in the future?
3/12/21, 6:21 AM
Okay here it comes: the mentor of the team becomes a daddy, the leader a power bottom, the second in command a submissive top, the team muscule becomes a power fucker (a guy with a lot of stamina) the brains a exhibitionist, and the rookie a very good cocksucker ( I don't know how many members the team will have, so I will be giving those)
The Author, but still anonymous
3/12/21, 5:01 AM
@Redcoma100, I'm glad to hear you liked it, thank you! @darkblade2814, actually neither. The Memoriser was made up for this one, the other story is planned completely differently. So while I may revisit this concept after the competition ends, there's currently nothing planned for Darryn. But if you have any ideas or suggestions, feel free to comment! @Ichobod, thank you, and for the suggestion. I suppose I could have worked the ending a bit differently, but not to worry. Darryn is not short for partners, nor leads. Perks of making your own gossip. Cheers! and @(blank), Thank you for the support!
3/12/21, 4:55 AM
More please!
3/12/21, 3:39 AM
Big fan of your work! Cant wait to see the rest of this!