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3/12/21, 2:37 AM
loved the story - but would have liked to see Darryn create false memory in Twofer that he (Darryn) was a regular casual sex partner but also a trusted friend. Therefore Twofer would keep coming back for sex - and a bit of gossip about other supers - giving Darryn leads for future stories
3/12/21, 2:14 AM
[@kgard12](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1146695) - Thanks! I can never tell if it's funny to other people. Glad you enjoyed it.
3/12/21, 2:00 AM
[@Jockmorphr](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10000115) - Thanks! I really like the personality shaping too, though it's not something I intended at the beginning. If I had this power, I think it's probably what'd turn me on the most though, so here it is. Like my 'Vanilla' series from last summer, some of these characters will play a fairly important role, and some of them are just... whatever gets me off. [@Ruffcub](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/21211) - All I do is push my own buttons. I get the feeling we might have a few buttons in common ;) @anon - Thank you sir! [@Buffy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/13727) - Thank you! I'll keep writing if y'all keep reading and commenting. @anon2 - Thank you as well! [@Mrdick](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001656) - I honestly didn't realize it was going anywhere until the first part was written and then... well, there's a whole set of outlines in my notebook now. It's quickly becoming a favourite for me too. [@darkblade2814](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/243317) - No promises ;) [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - I basically see it as a chastity thing for Caleb, no cage required. Love the cock ring uncertainty - yes, the one Marc is wearing is definitely on his finger. So far they've all been bottoms, but that's going to change as we move along. [@Rapids](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1149812) - There are definitely consequences, you can see the outline of them forming already, but it's not going to be a giant cock and balls. [@Tattcub](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/21054) - Let's keep doing it for you. The next chapter is waiting for approval as we speak ;)
3/12/21, 12:20 AM
Two words : Fucking Amazing. Thanks! And, I am only half through.
3/11/21, 11:47 PM
I was about to marry a girl but then My husband to. be. came into my life.I :gave him her diamond. and we got matching weddingbands on our midde fingers.
3/11/21, 11:38 PM
cool, will the Memoriser be involved or will be an expy of him?
3/11/21, 11:35 PM
Yup, that'll do it for me. Classic in the making Derek. Love it
3/11/21, 11:33 PM
Love this the way you described the superheros reshaping of his memories was really hot to read.
3/11/21, 11:27 PM
the ending was the hottest part! man im excited for the next chapter!
The Author, but anonymous
3/11/21, 11:26 PM
So, dropping a comment anonymously to not spoil the suspense, which hopefully is allowed. Thank you for commenting, seeing what people think really is the best part of writing here. @Bill, thank you, and I'm glad you liked the concept. With not describing Darryn, it was a conscious choice, though I get that maybe for a 3rd person narrative knowing more about the viewpoint character helps. In this case, it was more to let the reader sub in their favourite celebrity/crush/themselves as they prefer. @darkblade2814 it's interesting you say that, as this wasn't the original story I was planning to submit to this competition. The initial one I was working on I kept expanding the concept of, and the number of heroes involved, and I realised there's no good way to put it into a single chapter. So this one is a one and done, but there's another team of soon-to-be super-sluts on the horizon.