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3/11/21, 11:35 PM
Yup, that'll do it for me. Classic in the making Derek. Love it
3/11/21, 11:33 PM
Love this the way you described the superheros reshaping of his memories was really hot to read.
3/11/21, 11:27 PM
the ending was the hottest part! man im excited for the next chapter!
The Author, but anonymous
3/11/21, 11:26 PM
So, dropping a comment anonymously to not spoil the suspense, which hopefully is allowed. Thank you for commenting, seeing what people think really is the best part of writing here. @Bill, thank you, and I'm glad you liked the concept. With not describing Darryn, it was a conscious choice, though I get that maybe for a 3rd person narrative knowing more about the viewpoint character helps. In this case, it was more to let the reader sub in their favourite celebrity/crush/themselves as they prefer. @darkblade2814 it's interesting you say that, as this wasn't the original story I was planning to submit to this competition. The initial one I was working on I kept expanding the concept of, and the number of heroes involved, and I realised there's no good way to put it into a single chapter. So this one is a one and done, but there's another team of soon-to-be super-sluts on the horizon.
Anonymous
3/11/21, 9:31 PM
wow. wish I could this attention when I went shopping......
Anonymous
3/11/21, 9:22 PM
super story snd so different from the norm.....
Alex
3/11/21, 8:27 PM
I really like reading this again. I wanna be in a focus group like that.
Anonymous
3/11/21, 7:40 PM
His balls, dick or sex drive should grow more each time he controls someone as consequence.
3/11/21, 6:44 PM
Another great chapter. I liked how he sent Caleb to the gym. That is erotic torture that he can't get off until he gets swole. When I read the first chapter I was wandering if Marc bought a ring for his finger or a cock ring. I hope his roommate finds the packing list and orders a ring or a cock ring by mistake. Are the guys he turns strictly bottoms or do they turn the dorm into an orgy looking for relief? A campus full of hungry bottoms sounds hot.
3/11/21, 5:38 PM
Hope you do more soon