Man, you really know how to push my buttons... Another awesome update bro!

I'm really enjoying this! The personality shaping is a fun element. I hope we will continue to run into some of these guys as the story moves along so we can see their changes manifest!

Do you have any idea how fucking torn I am right now? Part of me wants to be furious. Only 8000 words?! How could you do this to us?! We need so much more! Never mind Erik craving pain like heroin. We're craving this story like it's a drug already! The other part of me is ready to suck your dick in gratitude while you write more because this story is so fucking amazing. Keeping Erik aware while he's twisted into Vincent's plaything was a stroke of genius. You always take these guys in just the best and unexpected directions. It's one of the best balances of sex and storytelling I've ever seen. Well done. You mentioned in one of your other Author's Notes that you are spending almost every free minute writing. Don't work so hard you get burned out! Life is stressful enough with the pandemic and everything else that goes on during a normal day. Make sure you're taking time for self-care, and I don't just mean jacking off. MASH is on Hulu, which I always recommend for a nice way to wind down. But do whatever keeps your batteries charged. And thank you!

Sweat 😍🤤 Can't wait!

I'm already anticipating the plot and am excited to see how this develops!

Please continue this story!

more please

[@Grant Spiral](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/57142) - Thank ye' sir! [@Evan](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/133763) - I mean... it wouldn't be one of my stories if I didn't leave someone wanting at the end. I wasn't sure if I wanted to do a multi-part story here, but I'm pretty sure I will be at this point. It's safe to say Riley will show up to have some fun, both with and without Marc. @anon - Thank you! [@Cris Kane](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/38728) - Hah! Safe to say, we'll be revisiting Dale and his advice in future chapters. Your comment made me laugh so hard I went back and invented a storyline for him. [@Stroppy Author](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/227812) - Thanks! I'm always fighting with myself about length. Glad to know this one hit the mark. [@Hypnoguy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/908028) - Thank you! I try to fit in a few jokes where I can. I do a little standup in real life, and I wish writing those jokes came half as easy as writing these ones. [@Lusty Stallion](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/595082) - Flatterer. Be careful or I'll drop by your place with my magic ring. [@GiveInToTheMusk](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/909380) - Thank you! Not too much musk in this story, but I figured if Marc's senses were on fire, he should at least think about how good Riley smells. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Glad to do it for you :) I wrote this one self-contained, since I wasn't sure how it'd turn out and I've been having a mad case of writers block lately. As soon as I hit post, my fingers started typing and I ended up with outlines eight more chapters. So yeah... there's gonna be a couple sequels. If everything goes according to plan (and it may not!) we should see Dale again in chapters 5 and 8, and maybe 9. [@wt85](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/15995) - The highest praise! It seems that my cock is insisting on eight more chapters, I hope you'll enjoy them all. [@Mrdick](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001656) - I really like writing stories with a simple concept, then watching as it spins out of control. I mean... that's not what's gonna happen here. [@Catalust](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/920370) - Thanks! You know me, I love a good twist. [@Mind Labyrinth](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/910312) - I'm stoked you commented this. I was sort of picturing Marc as asexual at the start. I'm glad it was interesting to someone who actually knows what that's like. Personally, in college, I was more of a 'fucking a different dude every week' guy. [@absman420](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/162063) - Don't worry, this thing is going to run for a few chapters. Dale is scheduled for at least two more appearances, and he's going to learn that life isn't always solved with fortune cookie guidance.

Fun story -- glad he FINALLY succumbed. I was concerned.

Just for me... can you go back into this story and write a last sentence that goes something like, "There was a whole world to fuck -- starting with that know-it-all school therapist. I'll show HIM confidence..." You know, just for the completest in me...? (Loved this, Derek.)