more please

[@Grant Spiral](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/57142) - Thank ye' sir! [@Evan](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/133763) - I mean... it wouldn't be one of my stories if I didn't leave someone wanting at the end. I wasn't sure if I wanted to do a multi-part story here, but I'm pretty sure I will be at this point. It's safe to say Riley will show up to have some fun, both with and without Marc. @anon - Thank you! [@Cris Kane](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/38728) - Hah! Safe to say, we'll be revisiting Dale and his advice in future chapters. Your comment made me laugh so hard I went back and invented a storyline for him. [@Stroppy Author](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/227812) - Thanks! I'm always fighting with myself about length. Glad to know this one hit the mark. [@Hypnoguy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/908028) - Thank you! I try to fit in a few jokes where I can. I do a little standup in real life, and I wish writing those jokes came half as easy as writing these ones. [@Lusty Stallion](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/595082) - Flatterer. Be careful or I'll drop by your place with my magic ring. [@GiveInToTheMusk](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/909380) - Thank you! Not too much musk in this story, but I figured if Marc's senses were on fire, he should at least think about how good Riley smells. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Glad to do it for you :) I wrote this one self-contained, since I wasn't sure how it'd turn out and I've been having a mad case of writers block lately. As soon as I hit post, my fingers started typing and I ended up with outlines eight more chapters. So yeah... there's gonna be a couple sequels. If everything goes according to plan (and it may not!) we should see Dale again in chapters 5 and 8, and maybe 9. [@wt85](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/15995) - The highest praise! It seems that my cock is insisting on eight more chapters, I hope you'll enjoy them all. [@Mrdick](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001656) - I really like writing stories with a simple concept, then watching as it spins out of control. I mean... that's not what's gonna happen here. [@Catalust](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/920370) - Thanks! You know me, I love a good twist. [@Mind Labyrinth](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/910312) - I'm stoked you commented this. I was sort of picturing Marc as asexual at the start. I'm glad it was interesting to someone who actually knows what that's like. Personally, in college, I was more of a 'fucking a different dude every week' guy. [@absman420](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/162063) - Don't worry, this thing is going to run for a few chapters. Dale is scheduled for at least two more appearances, and he's going to learn that life isn't always solved with fortune cookie guidance.

Fun story -- glad he FINALLY succumbed. I was concerned.

Just for me... can you go back into this story and write a last sentence that goes something like, "There was a whole world to fuck -- starting with that know-it-all school therapist. I'll show HIM confidence..." You know, just for the completest in me...? (Loved this, Derek.)

Very nice and wholesome conclusion! 😊

What a lovely story... not much mind control, but one of the cutest, most romantic and most beautiful love scenes I've read here!

very hot story, but did you recycle part of it?

this is a really interesting concept for me in particular, being largely Asexual. it'd be kind of fu to see what its like on the other side and put on a ring that gave me the libido of a rabbit farm hopped up on spanish fly and viagra. a super hot read, and excellent quality as always. bravo!

PERFECTION! Love how you set this up! Eriks lack of remorse is going to make it "delicious" enjoying what hes going to be put through! awesome!

great story. BRING MORE ON!