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BPtime
3/9/21, 7:49 AM
If this series keeps up the pace, wearing a speedo will never feel the same.
Lusty Stallion
3/9/21, 7:47 AM
Great story. I enjoyed the amount of transformations. Sounds like most of the guys were in the closet anyway
boi98229
3/9/21, 7:19 AM
i'm not usually into superhero stories, but this story is really hot. i love the early setup, character development, and the slow build to the latest conflict between Swimmerboy and Scorpio. Scorpio's intelligence and his preparations for the hero's capture is impressive. So far, Scorpio seems to be the top Dog, the alpha's Alpha. With the power of his intelligence, his patience, organizational and leadership skills, and his Alpha charisma, i really have to admire Scorpio. At this point i find myself cheering for Scorpio. i should mention too that while i like to read recent stories so I can provided a more useful and timely comment to the author, i really hate having to wait for later chapters!! i understand that you seem to have uploaded your first chapter only 4 minutes ago, but you really need to understand how i really really hate to wait!!! Really!! ;)
Anonymous
3/9/21, 6:32 AM
Please tell me there's more. This is a brilliant story and so hot. I can't wait to see how the characters develop. Simply brilliant.
3/9/21, 6:31 AM
Thanks, all. As always, glad you liked it. I, too, like it better when preppification is forced and unwanted. But I (heh) got curious if a skater could accidentally semi-willingly turn preppy on his own. But then, that wouldn't really be a GSS, would it? :) So I added the bit about sucking down prepster cum to become a full on prep. The way I see it, there was a part of him that wanted to, yes, but mostly he didn't want to have no sense of self and the feeling was so awful that he resigned himself to preppiness to make it go away. Was his father in on it? If you like... either way is fine. I'll have another one... as soon as I figure out how the next skater boy will be turned, and yes, I'll go back to against his will.
3/9/21, 4:35 AM
ooh, the drama! loving it so far!
BearBoi
3/9/21, 4:34 AM
real comfy ending with a real (musky) man sweeping Jessi off his feet~ It would have broken the pace, but it would have been neat to read Mike's end of the story, and his masculinization journey and change. or if there were a prequel, it would be neat to read about Chastity just because changes of accent and vocal mannerisms is something really great.
3/9/21, 3:39 AM
I don't often like 2nd person, but I loved this! It's so well done. The transformation is hot, the narrator does a great job, and the end result is everything I love in a spiral story: the target being turned into pure sex. I'm with Derek Williams, I'd prefer the muscle man version for myself, but I love a good twinkification story.
3/9/21, 3:24 AM
Sooo good. I'd love a continuation
3/9/21, 3:16 AM
I really loved the story! And I would maybe volunteer too so I can help the cause ;)