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BearBoi
3/9/21, 4:34 AM
real comfy ending with a real (musky) man sweeping Jessi off his feet~ It would have broken the pace, but it would have been neat to read Mike's end of the story, and his masculinization journey and change. or if there were a prequel, it would be neat to read about Chastity just because changes of accent and vocal mannerisms is something really great.
3/9/21, 3:39 AM
I don't often like 2nd person, but I loved this! It's so well done. The transformation is hot, the narrator does a great job, and the end result is everything I love in a spiral story: the target being turned into pure sex. I'm with Derek Williams, I'd prefer the muscle man version for myself, but I love a good twinkification story.
3/9/21, 3:24 AM
Sooo good. I'd love a continuation
3/9/21, 3:16 AM
I really loved the story! And I would maybe volunteer too so I can help the cause ;)
3/9/21, 1:40 AM
Man, this is fantastic. I'm so glad I discovered your story! 🤤🤤
abc123
3/9/21, 1:20 AM
I swear, if you, Robin, Edlam and Josmith write a book together, I would buy at least a hundred copies.
3/8/21, 10:22 PM
This story is so well-written! I loved the way you got into Eric's interiority so much! I really appreciated your descriptions. I'm glad you've got some more chapters in mind and will look forward to reading them!
3/8/21, 10:21 PM
Very hot story -- love second person narration!
3/8/21, 10:11 PM
oh my god,no. Not a cliffhanger xD I wanna see what happens on monday at the presentation, with the boss and the entire office
3/8/21, 10:07 PM
You and the fin-dom. Hot story.