Recent Comments

3/9/21, 12:06 PM
There's more coming. I am just distracted with finishing "Submit" and with life. In fairness, I actually started writing Submit before Fucktoy. Fucktoy just had a publishable first chapter before Submit did. And, yes ForgottenCradle, my intent is for Evan to become the next fucktoy and for Trey to find a new boyfriend. But, the story hasn't been written yet. Sometimes they go in unforeseen directions as they are being written.
3/9/21, 12:02 PM
Thanks for all the kind comments guys! Glad you enjoyed it. I'm tempted to contribute another chapter in the near future or try starting a series of my own. Thanks again.
3/9/21, 10:18 AM
A follow up would be immensely great.
BearBoi
3/9/21, 8:33 AM
as comfy and tender as this domination and submission stuff is, i do kind of hope there is some more resistance in the morning. It makes all the changes more satisfying when there is some struggle against them.
Jack
3/9/21, 8:10 AM
Good lord, do you honestly think we're going to be upset about this chapter? That we would find fault in Emit being pushed to the brink and beyond? Fuck no! It's inventive, it's sexy as hell, and the descriptions are drool-worthy. You're never going to win over 100% of the readers on this site, but there's a reason you always get so many comments and ratings here. I wouldn't be surprised if this was one of the highest viewed series on here. This is quickly overtaking my favorite series of all time, Keeping It In The Family. I can't speak for everyone, but my impatience has nothing to do with when characters get brought into the fun. As I've said before, you've earned the right to write this story the way that you want to. Your instincts are good and you should keep following them. You were right: this chapter wouldn't have been as good if you forced the brothers in somewhere. My impatience is that the next chapter isn't already up by the time I finish reading the current one. I suppose I could wait and just binge it all after it's written, but we both know I'm not going to do that! So, I will keep checking multiple times a day and I'll keep up the comments to let you know that this is fucking amazing.
boi98229
3/9/21, 8:10 AM
Of course, i also do not believe i would ever be a cash-fag. While i do love the confidence, charisma, and dominance of Master-X, i still can't imagine paying money to someone i have never even met. Yet, i did find myself enjoying the primary character's seduction from 'only as inspiration' to 'Please sell me your video!' As he fell into the fag mindset deeper and deeper, i started to wonder if maybe it wasn't so far fetched. In any case, it was definitely hot! Thanks!
BPtime
3/9/21, 7:49 AM
If this series keeps up the pace, wearing a speedo will never feel the same.
Lusty Stallion
3/9/21, 7:47 AM
Great story. I enjoyed the amount of transformations. Sounds like most of the guys were in the closet anyway
boi98229
3/9/21, 7:19 AM
i'm not usually into superhero stories, but this story is really hot. i love the early setup, character development, and the slow build to the latest conflict between Swimmerboy and Scorpio. Scorpio's intelligence and his preparations for the hero's capture is impressive. So far, Scorpio seems to be the top Dog, the alpha's Alpha. With the power of his intelligence, his patience, organizational and leadership skills, and his Alpha charisma, i really have to admire Scorpio. At this point i find myself cheering for Scorpio. i should mention too that while i like to read recent stories so I can provided a more useful and timely comment to the author, i really hate having to wait for later chapters!! i understand that you seem to have uploaded your first chapter only 4 minutes ago, but you really need to understand how i really really hate to wait!!! Really!! ;)
Anonymous
3/9/21, 6:32 AM
Please tell me there's more. This is a brilliant story and so hot. I can't wait to see how the characters develop. Simply brilliant.