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Ravenclaw
3/8/21, 12:49 PM
is good. hope there is more
Bostonlthrboy
3/8/21, 12:08 PM
so fucking hot!! i wish i met hypnodad
3/8/21, 11:52 AM
another vote for more massage
Scott
3/8/21, 11:47 AM
i hope the 2nd part does come very soon!
3/8/21, 10:31 AM
It's not finished. Additional chapters will detail how Matt, Carl, and Justin all fell into Aiden's control. In fact, I started writing the story with the next chapter about Matt's enslavement. It was only after I was mostly done with that chapter that I realized I had to tell Eric's story first, and then went back and re-wrote the story with Eric as the first victim we see fall.
Anonymous
3/8/21, 10:26 AM
Sexy stuff! Wouldn't mind having this happen to me
3/8/21, 10:00 AM
I like all the stuff with Matt and Justin reinforcing the programming and telling Eric how good it is to be a slave. To me, it would have worked a little bit better if their dialogue had a clear tone: either ecstatically happy (cult-like) or flatly unemotional (drone-like). Also, I would have loved to have gotten a sense of who Matt and Justin were before their conversions. Still, a well-done story, and I look forward to reading your future work!
Anonymous
3/8/21, 9:26 AM
i think the word you want is "naive" instead of "nieve"
3/8/21, 8:42 AM
please make the daddy the slave of the family
3/8/21, 8:27 AM
Love the mine control of the boss. Also love how Sebastian turned a straight man gay with just a kiss is extremely hot to me.