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Boomer
2/5/25, 10:42 AM
Oh very cruel fate for the 'dom' Hot

2/6/25, 2:41 AM
@[Boomer](/user/show/10007241) I always found stories with cruel endings (to some of the characters, of course) extremely hot :joy:
2/6/25, 1:51 AM
I love how you take us through possibly familiar (lol) ideas but the characters are unique, and so the story that comes from them interacting is unique!
2/6/25, 1:49 AM
Kinky :) It felt believable — the motivations were there and I love that.
Mar 15, 2024
2/6/25, 12:52 AM
I'm liking the language the chavs use more and more, thanks for using it to the max. Great story, man. I'll keep reading, no doubt. Thank you.
2/5/25, 11:40 PM
Both stories are super hot. They make you want to become a scally, if only that were possible...
2/5/25, 9:52 PM
One more Chapter to go! Thanks for reading. Let me know what you think is coming!
Joe Jack of Spades
2/5/25, 9:20 PM
More chapters this jack of spades loves this story.
2/5/25, 8:02 PM
If i ever get invited to the guys' party, i am going to pretend to be an Alpha Cock of the Walk. Maybe i can annoy the guys enough they will all want to drug me, take me upstairs, and show me my real place in the hierarchy.
2/5/25, 7:44 PM
@Wishful Thinking i'm with you. The narrator needs to be taken down hard by the Parker men and maybe all his housemates, then pegged by Rachel. But remember that at points along the way he has to ask for it and take active part in his downfall. If that's where this goes, it will be interesting to see just how this is accomplished. If anyone can make it happen though, after reading all the preceding chapters, i am convinced that @Jack Parker is the writer for the job. After having three of his Parker cousins taken down by this guy, Jack will have the motivation to make it happen (as well as please all (most?) of his readers). Jack's the man here though, so i will be pleased to submit to his wishes wherever he wants the story to go. :)
2/5/25, 7:41 PM
I really love this story! It's very well written and the power dynamics are really hot. You do a great job of putting us inside the main character's head and mindset.