Recent Comments

3/7/21, 4:36 AM
Great Story...... hope you can continue with it.
3/7/21, 3:34 AM
More and more I would love to see the Colonel Burke enslaved <3
boi98229
3/7/21, 3:16 AM
i like that the story documents the process of increasing mental and physical control of one person over another, but that isn't enough. The narration seems like an objective report for a science experiment. What's missing for me is a real sense of who these characters are and what the characters are feeling. i don't just want to be told what they are feeling; i want to feel what they are feeling.
3/7/21, 3:08 AM
Fuck yeah ! I need a coach like this... really hot story.
3/7/21, 2:04 AM
Excellent story!
Jack
3/7/21, 2:03 AM
It's been more than twenty minutes since this chapter came out, which means I'm going through withdrawals until the next one drops. I read this one three or four times, and I really have to agree with some of the other comments made. Emit's journey is surprisingly sweet, and (being a hopeless romantic myself) I admit I hope those feelings of love continue to grow.
3/7/21, 12:42 AM
Hooray!! Not only are you back writing but you finished this arc of the story!!! Good news to hear. I like that Pine and Mike can reflect on the things that have happened to them.
3/6/21, 11:22 PM
Loved this! More?!
3/6/21, 10:03 PM
Yesss, very hot! Hope the beard stays, maybe even grows a bit!
Nutiper
3/6/21, 9:00 PM
All I want to know is, will there be a sequel where Tim finally learns how to juggle (Helm and Evan's) balls? The suspense......!