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3/6/21, 1:20 AM
Fantastic story. The build up was worth the wait. Really looking forward to the next few chapters. Excellent wanking material.
3/5/21, 11:24 PM
Really like it man, good to see the story continue. I should continue to work on Chapter 2. Thanks for the inspiration.
3/5/21, 11:21 PM
❤️Musk❤️ Loved this one.
3/5/21, 8:54 PM
@Larry, @CE, thank you so much for your support! This was indeed meant to be 'done in one', and I wanted to concentrate on Redhawk. But you're right, I should linger on the corruption of innocent youth somewhat longer :) (And, please, always comment on comics or stories even if it's a private message to me). I have not written a lot, really, just this, the Jockboy unfinished group, and some Batman and Robin stuff on Nifty. (Some of which like the Mad Hatter tale should also be on here). I do have a novella of Black Tiger's corruption that I'm working on - might publish that on Amazon.
Conversion Enthusiast
3/5/21, 7:32 PM
Like Larry, I definitely have been a long time Patreon follower and I always liked the idea of you writing. Something I found to be similar to your comics is that the conclusion always comes so quickly. The pacing is so long for the primary target which is enjoyable, but when it comes to spreading the corruption, it was 1 or 2 paragraphs here and is often a panel or two in comics. I never wanted to say anything because I was grateful for what you produce to start with but yeah. I think Justice Boy would have been such a nice part to be fleshed out and paced more, even with expressing more resistance before falling under the sway of Dr. Hypnos. @MalSkin I thought about that too but I think submissions have to be complete in one write-up and if this does eventually get a continuation, i think that would probably bar it from being a submittable piece (unless Ebonart happened to have it all written out already!) I also have toyed with the idea of writing around Ebonart's art but I think that's something for me and them to discuss on our own terms
3/5/21, 6:54 PM
Thank youuu 🥰 And yes! There will be physical changes upon waking up, among other things. 😉
Tmp1142
3/5/21, 6:48 PM
maybe they will wake up with some physical changes?
3/5/21, 6:10 PM
@MuskySub Love this btw man! Wasn't sure if anyone was actually gonna write their own factory story so this was a nice surprise! Love the spray product! So much potential for different potions and items made to mess with people at the factory. Its cool so see what others think of on top of mine.
3/5/21, 6:05 PM
It's so nice to just have some cute, kinky and happy action.