Recent Comments

3/3/21, 7:58 PM
I like what you have written so far, so keep on doing what you are doing! Incest is wincest. Thanks again for the great story!
3/3/21, 3:16 PM
Identity thief that contain uniform steal (swap) (cops, soldier, swat) always my most favorite story, even better with no supernatural story. To take everything for one who is dominant is always nice. hope got more story in these theme.
3/3/21, 3:15 PM
I was torn on wether to include the Scottish slang but I thought it was part of the character. If I need to I can always post another version without his slang.
3/3/21, 1:45 PM
Thank you so much! I am loving your most recent series as well. I really appreciate it. I edited the climax a bit everyone. I felt it needed some fine tuning. Of course it's a bit longer... 🙈 But it's longer in the parts that matter!
3/3/21, 12:28 PM
Thanks so much everyone! 🥰🙏 Part 3 is up!
3/3/21, 11:30 AM
Me gustó mucho! No estoy tan acostumbrado a leer en español pero eso fue super bien, espero leer mas del sorcero y de los dos hermanos tambien! Gracias
3/3/21, 11:17 AM
That was worth waiting for.
goodbiforever
3/3/21, 8:26 AM
I'll be honest, I liked this overall, but constantly having to mentally translate the constable's thick accent into speech I could comprehend made it much harder to follow and consequentially less arousing. I couldn't lose myself in the fantasy and the sequence of events because I was having to re-read every statement out of a main character's mouth in order to parse it.
3/3/21, 8:25 AM
its a shame that there wont be more parts to this. normally, cigars and all turn me completely away, but this story is so incredibly hot.
3/3/21, 8:24 AM
Don't worry there will be another chapter soon but it will be a few more days. Thanks for all the comments and ratings, it keeps me motivated to carry on