Recent Comments

goodbiforever
3/3/21, 8:26 AM
I'll be honest, I liked this overall, but constantly having to mentally translate the constable's thick accent into speech I could comprehend made it much harder to follow and consequentially less arousing. I couldn't lose myself in the fantasy and the sequence of events because I was having to re-read every statement out of a main character's mouth in order to parse it.
3/3/21, 8:25 AM
its a shame that there wont be more parts to this. normally, cigars and all turn me completely away, but this story is so incredibly hot.
3/3/21, 8:24 AM
Don't worry there will be another chapter soon but it will be a few more days. Thanks for all the comments and ratings, it keeps me motivated to carry on
3/3/21, 8:13 AM
I hope you haven't run out of steam, Avnanizeis!
Anonymous
3/3/21, 5:32 AM
When you are so famous that even if you hide your name, anyone could recognize you instantly! :) Keep up good work!
Pillsburygoboy
3/3/21, 4:09 AM
wonderfully written and exceptionally creative, absolutely loved every part!! thank you so much!
3/3/21, 2:31 AM
the older brother likes being a cop. make him a police dog pup that gaurds the family.
3/3/21, 2:18 AM
Please continue. I am hard and throbbing.
3/3/21, 1:54 AM
I'd love for the brothers to retain all of their morals. Reluctant pleasure and all that. Make them desire Vincent AND feel guilty and disgusted by themselves, just like Emit was in the shower scene.
3/3/21, 12:18 AM
I'm enjoying the slow mental transformation of James and Dan. I look forward to where you take the story next.