Recent Comments

3/4/21, 10:38 AM
Well, I won't give away any plot points, but I think we're going on a very interesting journey.
3/4/21, 9:42 AM
I love this story and am so happy to see a new chapter!
3/4/21, 8:04 AM
Loving it so far, excellent work!
3/4/21, 8:01 AM
can't wait for more.
3/4/21, 7:42 AM
a good story, maybe it should have gone in the Fallen Hero cat
Jack
3/4/21, 6:47 AM
I'm interested to see where this story goes. I'm always a sucker for a good romance.
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3/4/21, 6:16 AM
I read it as a story I had to think about, and it wasn't until after the demonstration that I engaged with it as porn, by that point I'd gotten a bit more practiced at translating the dialect, and there was less of it. Very hot transformation btw.
3/4/21, 5:02 AM
Keep writing, this was super hot, I'll keep reading and wanking
3/4/21, 4:20 AM
I haven't read much of this chapter yet because I got pulled out by a continuity error: in Ch. 1, Tim's Dad was a Marine, but then Ch. 2 opens with Tim and Oliver being army brats. Going to keep reading though cuz Ch. 1 was way hot! Edit: Ch. 2 was just as hot, though whose cock was in whose cunt got a little mixed up in the hottest parts. I bet this was your plan all along, to make me get turned on by continuity errors. You fiend! 🤯