Recent Comments

3/2/21, 9:34 AM
Love it! The aware twins being controlled is so hot.
Art
3/2/21, 9:14 AM
Great story! Honestly, I love the slow burn because it's nice getting to see the mental changes coming on over time. I'd happily read a longer story like this to enjoy getting to really see every little piece of the changes taking place. The only bummer is that I have to wait for the next great chapter!
3/2/21, 8:32 AM
I can't wait for their feet to start changing and devolving into a pair of wide, long-toed, hairy mammoths!
Jack
3/2/21, 7:40 AM
You're becoming one of the most popular authors on this site and you're asking us for suggestions? If I could have written a story like this one, I would have, man. I have things that I like, things that get the cum flowing, but I'm not going to sit here and pretend that I have your talent. Your writing stands on its own, and wherever you decide to take things with the brothers will have us begging for more, just like we do every time one of your stories comes out. Don't feel obligated to us like that. You're doing a good job! Of course, I'll be open about the stuff that does get me horny. Obviously, the way you're going in this series is spot on and I've loved every word of it, but there's always been something missing from this site and I wonder if you're the author to finally make it happen. If it doesn't quite fit with your vision of these characters, don't worry. I certainly won't hold it against you! So few of this site's characters who control enemies, friends, family, etc. experience the pleasure of bottoming. I assume it's because being the bottom in a gay relationship is generally seen as weaker, but I don't see it like that. I'd love to finally see a story where the controller bottoms. They get to feel the wonderful pleasure that comes from it, as well as showing their thrall that even in what is considered the most alpha of positions, they're still slaves. You're a good writer. Your flow and character development are done extremely well. You've earned your top spot here, as well as the right to write what comes to you. Believe in your writing. Take confidence from our responses. You really are doing good! I know it's weird to say on a porn story site like this, but sometimes self-esteem boosts come from unexpected places.
Anonymous
3/2/21, 7:05 AM
I'm always down for a good big strong alpha male into a loving playful pup. Then there is also a classic himbo, cant go wrong there. I also really like the idea of one of the brothers, or dad even, looking like a total leather dom but is really a devoted sub.
Hob
3/2/21, 6:40 AM
Really good start! I'm excited for the whats to come.
3/2/21, 6:32 AM
As usual I truly enjoyed this chapter! I love how the dad is coming along nicely with his training and I get my own special thrill whenever he's programmed As for the boys? I would love to see more kink as well maybe a well developed sock and foot fetish, something along those lines to debase themselves in front of their brother. This was a surprise treat for a Monday thank you!!
3/2/21, 6:19 AM
faaaantastic
3/2/21, 4:55 AM
Extremely hot, smutty, well written chapter! A great addiction to the series, this was incredibly hot! Congrats!
3/2/21, 4:41 AM
I love the hot changes you have made in the daddy slave and look forward to the transformation of the brothers. Great work!