Recent Comments

3/2/21, 1:14 PM
Great first chapter! I'm looking forward to chapter 2.
Rubber_Lover14
3/2/21, 11:02 AM
Ooo, how about making one of the older brothers obsessed with musk? Like licking armpits and feet, and sockgagging him and all that. But have it where his mind still hates it but his body loves it
3/2/21, 10:58 AM
really love the obliviousnes of the dad. I think that was the hottest part for me. hope to see more obliviousnes aspect thanks for writing :)
Sam
3/2/21, 10:15 AM
Suggestions: i think the older brother should become a dumb body builder that desperately needs to show his body at all times and that cant stand the thought of not having a fist in him at all times. the younger brother should be turned into a sissy pothead with a piss kink and needs to drink a bottle of his daddies piss from him everyday just to feel satisfied
Anonymous
3/2/21, 10:09 AM
i thought this story was hot... a lot going on but got the juices flowing... also loves the links to other stories in the comments... highlights old stories to reread!!!
Ravenclaw
3/2/21, 9:58 AM
really good but would have liked more sexual
3/2/21, 9:34 AM
Love it! The aware twins being controlled is so hot.
Art
3/2/21, 9:14 AM
Great story! Honestly, I love the slow burn because it's nice getting to see the mental changes coming on over time. I'd happily read a longer story like this to enjoy getting to really see every little piece of the changes taking place. The only bummer is that I have to wait for the next great chapter!
3/2/21, 8:32 AM
I can't wait for their feet to start changing and devolving into a pair of wide, long-toed, hairy mammoths!
Jack
3/2/21, 7:40 AM
You're becoming one of the most popular authors on this site and you're asking us for suggestions? If I could have written a story like this one, I would have, man. I have things that I like, things that get the cum flowing, but I'm not going to sit here and pretend that I have your talent. Your writing stands on its own, and wherever you decide to take things with the brothers will have us begging for more, just like we do every time one of your stories comes out. Don't feel obligated to us like that. You're doing a good job! Of course, I'll be open about the stuff that does get me horny. Obviously, the way you're going in this series is spot on and I've loved every word of it, but there's always been something missing from this site and I wonder if you're the author to finally make it happen. If it doesn't quite fit with your vision of these characters, don't worry. I certainly won't hold it against you! So few of this site's characters who control enemies, friends, family, etc. experience the pleasure of bottoming. I assume it's because being the bottom in a gay relationship is generally seen as weaker, but I don't see it like that. I'd love to finally see a story where the controller bottoms. They get to feel the wonderful pleasure that comes from it, as well as showing their thrall that even in what is considered the most alpha of positions, they're still slaves. You're a good writer. Your flow and character development are done extremely well. You've earned your top spot here, as well as the right to write what comes to you. Believe in your writing. Take confidence from our responses. You really are doing good! I know it's weird to say on a porn story site like this, but sometimes self-esteem boosts come from unexpected places.