Recent Comments

CLB
2/28/21, 6:11 AM
as others have said… very promising intro! Well written and intriguing looking forward to the next chapter(s)
2/28/21, 4:19 AM
I really like the changing jerks to good people concept. Makes a nice change of pace from all the "revenge" stories.
Anonymous
2/28/21, 3:09 AM
Im excited that we will have the brothers joining soon
S
2/28/21, 1:31 AM
In love with this story line, both these characters are amazing. So into seeing the battle Emit is having to go through. Cant wait for the brothers to be mindfucked to oblivion
Anonymous
2/28/21, 12:16 AM
this was so hot, please continue!
2/27/21, 11:18 PM
Love it. love it. love it. love it. love it. 10/10 no question
2/27/21, 9:52 PM
So glad there's a new chapter already. I think your wiring is very fresh cuz you front rush things. You take your time by enjoying the mind fucking of the victim. It's not slow in a way where it gets boring the longer the story gets. And it's also not rushed where we go from 1 guy to another in a matter of chapters. I really enjoy it. And I think the best way to respond to all the comments is to send us another chapter ;)
2/27/21, 9:34 PM
Have been looking forward to this and wasn't disappointed - thank you.
Jack
2/27/21, 7:59 PM
I'll admit I was expecting to wait a lot longer for this particular installment, especially after your devastating two week hiatus, so imagine my surprise when I logged on this morning only to see another 7,000 word epic grace my screen. I don't want to just throw generic praise your way, so I'll say that I absolutely fucking love getting to see the different points of view between Vincent and Emit. I may be reading it wrong, but it feels like Emit is a little further along than Vincent thinks he is, and reading as a thrall voluntarily throws himself further into depravity is hot as hell. I can't wait to see the brothers get involved in this, but for now I look forward to a complete mindfuck of Emit. Weave your words, author!
2/27/21, 7:57 PM
I love my self a good revenge story. Mirrors what i have been through for the most of the time but with the possibility of the revenge i craved. Good writing sir, and good job with the story.