Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/27/21, 12:49 PM
I can't wait for the next one! maybe it'll have the brother and the dad? The mom could have to go out of town for a work thing for a few days and it leaves the 3 of them to bond....
2/27/21, 12:43 PM
Its mindcontrol hypnotic prose and ideas and characters that get me. This is a typical story executed so well it takes it to new levels Great job
2/27/21, 11:50 AM
I hope to see how the world changed with the wishes
Lusty Stallion
2/27/21, 9:35 AM
Love the start man. looking forward to the next part
2/27/21, 9:23 AM
Ooh, what gorgeous language and imagery. And it's paired so perfectly with the reality and harshness of the mortal coil. I love stories about strange deals and pacts. Let's see what happens!
Anonymous
2/27/21, 8:13 AM
i struggle with two characters with names beginning with the same letter - especially when they both have the same number of letters... but such a hot story and transformations...
2/27/21, 7:58 AM
What fun! You definitely succeeded in making the story leaner, but you kept plenty of juicy details, too. Great job!
2/27/21, 7:34 AM
Great second chapter and a nice pace :) keep it up!
Centuria
2/27/21, 6:53 AM
I would prefer white briefs and making him cum in them