Recent Comments

2/27/21, 2:21 AM
This is such a hot story - well-written and refreshingly not verbose. I loved it.
Jack
2/27/21, 1:51 AM
I read this and I honestly didn't know what to say. The master once again takes cum-filled pen to paper? You're edging us harder than Vincent did to Emit? This story is 9000 words straight from my smut swirling mind? All of them at once? The only thing, the only possible thing, that I didn't like about it was the whole fucking site hasn't been replaced by your stories. Make it about 500,000 words longer and I'll stop complaining.
Anonymous
2/27/21, 12:21 AM
wonderful!
Anonymous
2/27/21, 12:19 AM
wow
2/26/21, 11:30 PM
A great first chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next part. And welcome to the limelight of being an author on GSS :D
2/26/21, 11:00 PM
thanks guys, glad you enjoyed it
2/26/21, 10:02 PM
Love the setup, can't wait to see where it goes! And I love me a good big-dicked bottom!
mrgoon44
2/26/21, 9:42 PM
i liked how the gay friend wasn't the villain for once excellent job
Oct 16, 2006
Lovedthisstory
2/26/21, 7:38 PM
Any chance, you could write a second part too? I'd love to read a sequel
2/26/21, 6:57 PM
It's an interesting premise. This would work well as an introduction to a larger story. This is very much a world building introduction, and introduces an array of characters and possible plot points to be explored an/or developed in later chapters or continuations within the world setting. I'm very interested to see what comes of this. there's a lot off potential, both as a good story and as a piece for 'stress relief.' It reads almost like a play manuscript, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Whichever way you decide to write, I recommend sticking with it. Consistency is key for clear understanding for the reader. Char1: *does an action* "says some stuff" char2: *reacts* "replies" vs Char1 does the thing, then says "something related". Char2 replies, "something else." Both are reasonable, as long as its consistent throughout.