Recent Comments

2/25/21, 12:01 PM
great chapter, and since this chapter is a cliffhanger I hope the next one would come out soon. 🙂
2/25/21, 11:57 AM
this was well thought out sweet and lovable
Gasuda
2/25/21, 11:23 AM
This was such a great story! What a fun ride! It took awhile to get going, and at times the writing could be awkward, but each chapter got better in every way. This is a shining example of a satisfying story for this site, and I'm so happy I got to read it. Great fucking job!
boi98229
2/25/21, 8:54 AM
Thanks so much for this wonderful story of seduction, domination, and mind control. i love that while Chris and Austin were a happy balanced couple on their own, they were just as happy as a threesome once their training was complete even though their roles, particularly Chris's role changed quite substantially both mentally and physically. I thought the balance in the threesome relationship was perfect with sharing and love between them all. At first i was a bit perplexed at the ability of Daddy to seduce and pass detailed information to Austin and Chris with just his music, but of course you mentioned some singing which presumably carried clear and direct instruction, and you added the reference to the Pied Piper of Hamelin, which along with the story tag, "Powers and Magic" clarified that point. All in all, i love this story!
2/25/21, 8:13 AM
I always love a good genie story and this definitely has potential!! Great set up, the only comment I have is to try and split up a few sentences, as your first paragraph is largely one big sentence hahaha. But yeah I fav’d it and I can’t wait to see what you do next!
Anonymous
2/25/21, 7:35 AM
Cannot believe this hasn't had any comments yet. It's definitely a fun story, I love the transformation style. Would love to read more.
2/25/21, 7:13 AM
LOVE this. Please keep up the great work!
boi98229
2/25/21, 7:02 AM
So hot!! i just wish i could have that hypno file! i am rather addicted to hypnosis myself, particularly gay submissive/bottom boy/enslavement hypnosis, but have yet to find one that takes anything less than weeks of listening to have even a marginally effective result. This story must be quite effective though as i already seem to be addicted to it. i'm off to read the next chapter; can't wait!!
Hypno Boy
2/25/21, 7:00 AM
This is so hot. Just as hot as the first chapter, to be sure. I did miss having some older-younger action like in the first chapter, though. All in all, I love this work. It's a work of art
Hypno Sub
2/25/21, 6:57 AM
This story is amazing. I love the complexity of the desire, disbelief, and obedience of the boy. I've read it multiple times and each time loved it more. Keep up the great work!