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2/25/21, 7:13 AM
LOVE this. Please keep up the great work!
boi98229
2/25/21, 7:02 AM
So hot!! i just wish i could have that hypno file! i am rather addicted to hypnosis myself, particularly gay submissive/bottom boy/enslavement hypnosis, but have yet to find one that takes anything less than weeks of listening to have even a marginally effective result. This story must be quite effective though as i already seem to be addicted to it. i'm off to read the next chapter; can't wait!!
Hypno Boy
2/25/21, 7:00 AM
This is so hot. Just as hot as the first chapter, to be sure. I did miss having some older-younger action like in the first chapter, though. All in all, I love this work. It's a work of art
Hypno Sub
2/25/21, 6:57 AM
This story is amazing. I love the complexity of the desire, disbelief, and obedience of the boy. I've read it multiple times and each time loved it more. Keep up the great work!
2/25/21, 5:28 AM
I'm still enjoying the story, especially the scenes with Justin in this chapter. But the one thing that's bothering me is that, in my opinion, there's too much "telling" about Eric's mental transformation and not enough "showing." For instance, we get lines like this: "A switch in my mind flipped and I became Slave Eric–the totally submissive slave of Master." Yet Eric's narrative voice remains calm, detached, and analytical, so we're not really getting the first-hand sensation of that mental switch, which first-person narration is especially good at conveying.
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
2/25/21, 4:42 AM
This is so sweet like wow
2/25/21, 4:23 AM
loved it. I hope there is more to come.
BearBoi
2/25/21, 3:58 AM
>slight cherry aftertaste oh Jeffy you dumb bitch and don't worry about Tiny not fucking you, you need a *real* man to treat you right. Some mousey boi couldn't do it~
giveintothemusk
2/25/21, 3:30 AM
This has been so excellent!
2/25/21, 2:34 AM
Loved it, i wish it had been longer though!