Recent Comments

2/25/21, 5:28 AM
I'm still enjoying the story, especially the scenes with Justin in this chapter. But the one thing that's bothering me is that, in my opinion, there's too much "telling" about Eric's mental transformation and not enough "showing." For instance, we get lines like this: "A switch in my mind flipped and I became Slave Eric–the totally submissive slave of Master." Yet Eric's narrative voice remains calm, detached, and analytical, so we're not really getting the first-hand sensation of that mental switch, which first-person narration is especially good at conveying.
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
2/25/21, 4:42 AM
This is so sweet like wow
2/25/21, 4:23 AM
loved it. I hope there is more to come.
BearBoi
2/25/21, 3:58 AM
>slight cherry aftertaste oh Jeffy you dumb bitch and don't worry about Tiny not fucking you, you need a *real* man to treat you right. Some mousey boi couldn't do it~
giveintothemusk
2/25/21, 3:30 AM
This has been so excellent!
2/25/21, 2:34 AM
Loved it, i wish it had been longer though!
thesaxcat
2/25/21, 2:29 AM
looks like I'm going to have to create one. It will take some time, but I'll get on it.
Cnycheckin
2/25/21, 2:01 AM
hot start. would love to read followup
2/25/21, 1:29 AM
I had to go put in my pup tail after reading all that hot butt plug action, then Eric got real dick. I feel happy for the guy. He's falling into slavery, he knows it, he can't stop it...looking forward to how his mind deals when his new life is complete.
2/25/21, 12:51 AM
It is amazing how this story keeps being interesting and hot even with little to no sex involved. that's a good mind control story. I cannot wait for the next chapter