Recent Comments

2/23/21, 12:50 PM
I've been looking forward to Tim's dad to take a turn so badly now
2/23/21, 11:55 AM
I see, I hope everything goes well
2/23/21, 11:27 AM
Thank you. I thought the mormon boys would be done in two parts, but I may do each an individual story. Or at least Noah will get his own, the two passive boys may be done together...not quite sure yet.
Anonymous
2/23/21, 9:37 AM
This is awesome!! Please continue
2/23/21, 9:25 AM
I like it, keep going
2/23/21, 9:21 AM
I like were this is going
2/23/21, 9:02 AM
Say, this is great stuff! Oblivious, magical world change stories are always fun. :) The only note I would give is the classic "show, don't tell"--the section about the genie lamp and exactly what's going on is spelled out explicitly for the reader, instead of us getting to discover it for ourselves/see it in action. Other than that, it is a great first chapter! I can't wait to see more wishes come true. :)
2/23/21, 6:06 AM
oh man! I really hope he gets into more foot fun with Corbin and Ellis again! That was so hot! I cant wait for the next chapter!
Mar 17, 2020
2/23/21, 5:33 AM
Nicely bizarre... boyo.
Anonymous
2/23/21, 5:30 AM
i wish you'd update this story :<