Recent Comments

thesaxcat
2/23/21, 3:23 AM
He'd been under control for a long time...it was a matter of time before he'd break it. The question is...will he stay free or not.
2/23/21, 3:09 AM
bravo....! bravo!!! why are good stories that I love end so quickly or left in cliff hanger....? sighhh I wish you continue the story but this conclusion is just so perfect.... sighh
Island Jock
2/23/21, 1:56 AM
Great story, really like your style.
jamiemboy
2/23/21, 1:13 AM
Wow really loved it!!! amazing story. Hehe i would love to read more about farmer john and his farmhands :) i also really think there would be room for this idea of 'breeding' inside of the barn like cows/bulls :) would fit the farm theme hehe... overall loved it!
thesaxcat
2/23/21, 12:44 AM
Not gonna lie...I really enjoyed Nathan taking control of Joe. I know what happens of course, but I really did like that aspect here. You have a fun writing style that particularly enjoy.
Chase
2/23/21, 12:26 AM
maybe had him kill his best friend Dash and detailed how he totally corrupt the others. well, just some random thoughts. but what an amazing story man! great job!
Chase
2/22/21, 11:34 PM
was hoping to read more of him somehow destroying his former friends or corrupting them fully as well. but great story!!!!!
Kametzer
2/22/21, 11:31 PM
My god can I meet this man please!? The need to watch my scale numbers go up is strong!
2/22/21, 9:03 PM
Amazing. Also knew it from cyoc, but I love the updates to the old stories. Hope you're going to write new chapters!
2/22/21, 8:11 PM
I just love a happy ending. Thanks for completing the story. I was just thinking/hoping that it ended on a cliffhanger in the previous chapter.