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Lusty Stallion
2/21/21, 10:57 PM
Just my sort of story man. A guy granted power and he selfishly uses it on unsuspecting, undeserving men. Love it. Looking forward to more
2/21/21, 10:53 PM
The story was excellent. Well conceived, well constructed, well told, and definitely wanking material for anyone into gay erotic mind control. My only question is: why haven't you entered it into the Fallen Hero writing contest? I think it already won.
2/21/21, 9:19 PM
Great one. Love to be at that show. Yes like to see another part. Re minded me of a show i was at. I was at a "R" rated hypnosis show. I was arozed in the stow and thought i get up and wake, On stage or in this car, on the way to his house. talking about this next show, I be in. Thank you.
Anonymous
2/21/21, 8:19 PM
looking forward to wherever this is going!
Conversion Enthusiast
2/21/21, 8:00 PM
Like Hypnothrill, I definitely had to leverage what little history of Megaman to make things make sense but I liked this idea a lot. I love seeing the conversion and corruption of supposed heroes, but I wish I had more of a lengthier conversion for the heroes. Granted the scenes were pretty clear and I think I made a pretty clear picture of things as the story was told so that was kinda cool too.
2/21/21, 6:10 PM
I definitely enjoyed the elements with the hero being corrupted and then infecting his comrades with the malware so they would serve Dr. Wily as well. But because I'm not very familiar with the Mega Man franchise, I had difficulty following parts of the story.
2/21/21, 4:42 PM
I love it. It's so well written and described, it's pretty cool, the change of mind is great. Also, I'm a long time Mega Man fan, so this hit me straight in the nostalgia. Great story!
Anonymous
2/21/21, 4:22 PM
Please, write a sequel
IvorySilk
2/21/21, 4:11 PM
Thank you everyone for your wonderful feedback again! I'm really glad you all enjoyed this story. It sat on computer for a solid year before I pulled myself together to finishing it, and I'm happy I did now. ^^
Author
2/21/21, 4:02 PM
@goodbiforever - I'm really grateful for you catching that massive plot hole. I've fixed it now. To save you re-reading it (although you can) basically Brad wishes that he can start and stop time and then starts commanding time to start and stop. I hope I'm allowed to fix the issue in my submission and I'm grateful for you in picking it up. I was so caught up in the writing of this, that I missed it! Thanks bro (I'm posting annonymously in case people don't want to know who I am, even with the link to the previous parts at the top)