Recent Comments

2/21/21, 4:42 PM
I love it. It's so well written and described, it's pretty cool, the change of mind is great. Also, I'm a long time Mega Man fan, so this hit me straight in the nostalgia. Great story!
Anonymous
2/21/21, 4:22 PM
Please, write a sequel
IvorySilk
2/21/21, 4:11 PM
Thank you everyone for your wonderful feedback again! I'm really glad you all enjoyed this story. It sat on computer for a solid year before I pulled myself together to finishing it, and I'm happy I did now. ^^
Author
2/21/21, 4:02 PM
@goodbiforever - I'm really grateful for you catching that massive plot hole. I've fixed it now. To save you re-reading it (although you can) basically Brad wishes that he can start and stop time and then starts commanding time to start and stop. I hope I'm allowed to fix the issue in my submission and I'm grateful for you in picking it up. I was so caught up in the writing of this, that I missed it! Thanks bro (I'm posting annonymously in case people don't want to know who I am, even with the link to the previous parts at the top)
thesaxcat
2/21/21, 3:06 PM
Thanks for the comments! I hope the story fleshes out more as the chapters go on. They start shorter...so I hope they become more to your liking!
2/21/21, 2:05 PM
I am enjoying the themes you are exploring in this hot tale of world transformation. Thanks for continuing the story.
Anonymous
2/21/21, 11:52 AM
Miss naya's blurry on ao3 is SO GOOD and can see how it inspired this story. You did a great job
2/21/21, 11:22 AM
I need to hear what happens next! What did the text message say? How did the Sunday at church go? Please continue this story!
2/21/21, 11:07 AM
This was great! I really enjoyed the slow burn of the reveal - and how Mike's now trapped... so good. Excellent work.
2/21/21, 11:06 AM
This was so, so, so enjoyable. Captivating from start to finish, beautifully thought out and fun! Sad it's over - happy I got to read it! Thanks.