Recent Comments

2/21/21, 6:10 PM
I definitely enjoyed the elements with the hero being corrupted and then infecting his comrades with the malware so they would serve Dr. Wily as well. But because I'm not very familiar with the Mega Man franchise, I had difficulty following parts of the story.
2/21/21, 4:42 PM
I love it. It's so well written and described, it's pretty cool, the change of mind is great. Also, I'm a long time Mega Man fan, so this hit me straight in the nostalgia. Great story!
Anonymous
2/21/21, 4:22 PM
Please, write a sequel
IvorySilk
2/21/21, 4:11 PM
Thank you everyone for your wonderful feedback again! I'm really glad you all enjoyed this story. It sat on computer for a solid year before I pulled myself together to finishing it, and I'm happy I did now. ^^
Author
2/21/21, 4:02 PM
@goodbiforever - I'm really grateful for you catching that massive plot hole. I've fixed it now. To save you re-reading it (although you can) basically Brad wishes that he can start and stop time and then starts commanding time to start and stop. I hope I'm allowed to fix the issue in my submission and I'm grateful for you in picking it up. I was so caught up in the writing of this, that I missed it! Thanks bro (I'm posting annonymously in case people don't want to know who I am, even with the link to the previous parts at the top)
thesaxcat
2/21/21, 3:06 PM
Thanks for the comments! I hope the story fleshes out more as the chapters go on. They start shorter...so I hope they become more to your liking!
2/21/21, 2:05 PM
I am enjoying the themes you are exploring in this hot tale of world transformation. Thanks for continuing the story.
Anonymous
2/21/21, 11:52 AM
Miss naya's blurry on ao3 is SO GOOD and can see how it inspired this story. You did a great job
2/21/21, 11:22 AM
I need to hear what happens next! What did the text message say? How did the Sunday at church go? Please continue this story!
2/21/21, 11:07 AM
This was great! I really enjoyed the slow burn of the reveal - and how Mike's now trapped... so good. Excellent work.