Recent Comments

2/21/21, 2:21 AM
It's nice to hear that there's a fellow Ace in the community, and i totally hear you about difficulties with sex scenes. i liked what you've brought here though, so i encourage you to keep writing! my personal preference is that the mind control transitions be fleshed out more, but that's only a personal thing. keep up the great work!
2/21/21, 1:33 AM
are you going to create anymore chapters. This story is incredibly hot. Ready for more
dannylyndin
2/20/21, 9:57 PM
cant wait for ch.2
IvorySilk
2/20/21, 9:44 PM
Thank you all for you kind feedback! And @Malskin, you're most probably right. :P
2/20/21, 9:33 PM
Thank you for these stories, as you said very dark......i for one would really like to see this carry on, see Lucas works for his Daddy. i think it next time he will have no doubts about following all orders
2/20/21, 9:15 PM
damn hot
2/20/21, 9:10 PM
Super hot! I looooove a lusty demon corruption story, especially with this cute little relationship at the middle!
goodbiforever
2/20/21, 8:56 PM
Hot, but one thing bothered me: if he can't use wishes to undo previous wishes, how the hell is he managing to undo his time freezes? That seems like a blatant contradiction to me. "I wish Target X was State Y" and "I wish Target X was no longer State Y" IS reversing a wish, as far as I can tell. A decent rephrase to work around that would be, "I wish Target X was State Y until I decide to end the effect." - by including the negation clause in the first wish, you no longer need to break your own rules.
2/20/21, 8:47 PM
really damn hot. love it. I'm a total leatherman myself. love other guys into the
2/20/21, 8:44 PM
Just here re-reading one of my favourite stories of recent memory. Great work, man!