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2/20/21, 1:33 PM
Cool, I hope to see more of this, let see how the city changes
Feb 14, 2021
2/20/21, 1:27 PM
Thank you!
2/20/21, 1:26 PM
Really nicely written and I like discovering what's happening alongside Eric. Personally, I am very into story-focused, expository erotica with developed characters! Looking forward to more from you, either in this story or another!
Anonymous
2/20/21, 12:19 PM
"These pants, Babe, are made for war not love.” LOL
Anonymous
2/20/21, 12:13 PM
That was hot and sweet at the same time! I loved the Preppy cameo. Hopefully we will get to the pup play soon
Anonymous
2/20/21, 9:58 AM
Great chapter but how can you leave us hanging like this. I hope the next chapter is soon.
2/20/21, 6:52 AM
Dark as forewarned, but such a hot, well-written story of seduction.
2/20/21, 6:36 AM
Love the progression of events and look forward to the next chapter.
2/20/21, 5:36 AM
Really well-written and extremely hot. Thank you for your excellent work!
2/20/21, 4:06 AM
Hot take on the magic potion concept (can I get some of that, too?!). I'd love more of Erik in the singlet and training or competing with his new teammates. There's a nice opportunity for a sequel to this that explores and juxtaposes Erik's relationships with his teammates and his role on team with his relationship/role with Jim. Or perhaps the longer-term effects of the potion could be brought to light through some anxiety-producing but sexy AF unexpected or amplified consequences for Erik's performance, relations with teammates, or self-control in and out of the singlet.