Recent Comments

2/17/21, 7:08 PM
yes you are very cruel 😫
2/17/21, 6:22 PM
it' s FANTASTIC STORY. I would like to continue.I like also very much the feet,and I hope that you accept this suggestion 😉
Anonymous
2/17/21, 6:02 PM
This series of stories just gets better and better!
2/17/21, 5:48 PM
Can't wait for more.
IvorySilk
2/17/21, 1:05 PM
Thank you all for your wonderful feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
2/17/21, 12:58 PM
Incredible. I'm a fan of muscle theft. Yet, you've provided quite a convincing parallel thrill. He's useless as a powerful man.... and a mere boy for daddy. Most excellent.
Fred
2/17/21, 9:55 AM
yes pleas make a following capture
2/17/21, 7:02 AM
A Great ReVision!
2/17/21, 6:21 AM
exciting! can't wait to see what happens
Anonymous
2/17/21, 5:20 AM
I would encourage you to break up your longer paragraphs. Particularly during the transformation portions, where it quickly became a wall of text that became too difficult to follow. At the very least, every time someone else says something, make a new paragraph. Apart from that, this idea is cool, and I'd like to see where this goes.