Recent Comments

2/17/21, 5:13 AM
I really liked this! I think it was smart to start the story in the middle of Eric's transformation. I just had some trouble buying the premise that this physical and mental transformation has been going on for months, and neither Eric nor his gymrat roommate Justin noticed there was something different about him until just now.
2/17/21, 4:44 AM
That was so hot.
2/17/21, 4:33 AM
Loved this first chapter! I look forward to more.
2/17/21, 4:15 AM
There's got to be more to this story.
2/17/21, 3:33 AM
Fuckin' great idea, Man! Couldn't stop reading it till I finished.
Anonymous
2/17/21, 3:30 AM
amazing story, love to see more
Anonymous
2/17/21, 2:36 AM
Fuck this is hot! We need more dark dystopian stories like this!
2/17/21, 1:55 AM
Very hot. Well paced. Very well developed and written. We are probably looking at the winner of the fallen hero contest.
Anonymous
2/17/21, 12:48 AM
awesome
2/16/21, 11:52 PM
great story - looking forward to more