Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/17/21, 3:30 AM
amazing story, love to see more
Anonymous
2/17/21, 2:36 AM
Fuck this is hot! We need more dark dystopian stories like this!
2/17/21, 1:55 AM
Very hot. Well paced. Very well developed and written. We are probably looking at the winner of the fallen hero contest.
Anonymous
2/17/21, 12:48 AM
awesome
2/16/21, 11:52 PM
great story - looking forward to more
2/16/21, 11:41 PM
i like to keep you on the edge ... of your seat, LOL
2/16/21, 10:51 PM
amazing second chapter! i love how the corruption is a slow burn, having the hero coaxed into following commands while being swept by the pleasure of obedience 
2/16/21, 10:51 PM
I like this fuller version better. I've always enjoyed this story, it pushes all my buttons and deals with my kinks and preferences. I'm guessing English is not your first language cause there are quite a few grammatical mistakes, but neither is mine so all is forgiven on my end... as long as you continue this story and we get to see what the mirror's plan is after all! Again thanks for the pleasure you bring me through your stories
2/16/21, 9:33 PM
Thanks! It's not often I get any return except for my beta-reader, and people don't rate a lot, so I have no idea if people like what I write or not. There should be two coming soon!
Ron
2/16/21, 9:17 PM
Well done! A very fun and enjoyable non-erotic read.