Recent Comments

2/17/21, 4:33 AM
Loved this first chapter! I look forward to more.
2/17/21, 4:15 AM
There's got to be more to this story.
2/17/21, 3:33 AM
Fuckin' great idea, Man! Couldn't stop reading it till I finished.
Anonymous
2/17/21, 3:30 AM
amazing story, love to see more
Anonymous
2/17/21, 2:36 AM
Fuck this is hot! We need more dark dystopian stories like this!
2/17/21, 1:55 AM
Very hot. Well paced. Very well developed and written. We are probably looking at the winner of the fallen hero contest.
Anonymous
2/17/21, 12:48 AM
awesome
2/16/21, 11:52 PM
great story - looking forward to more
2/16/21, 11:41 PM
i like to keep you on the edge ... of your seat, LOL
2/16/21, 10:51 PM
amazing second chapter! i love how the corruption is a slow burn, having the hero coaxed into following commands while being swept by the pleasure of obedience 