Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/16/21, 9:13 PM
This was one of my favorite stories! Looking forward to see how it moves forward!
IvorySilk
2/16/21, 9:01 PM
Thank you guys for your feedback! I'm glad you guys are liking it so far. To be clear about the disclaimer, because this is an episodic venture, I left it there to ensure people don't sign up for a story they don't later feel comfortable with, even though the first couple chapters will be more tame. All the same, thank you guys for sticking with me so far!
2/16/21, 8:29 PM
Hope it's a little better now, mattersonline. Happy belated Birthday!
2/16/21, 8:07 PM
can we stop doing this? writing an amazingly hot scene such as controlling all of their clocks like that and just ending it so damn fast?! I hate dave so much
2/16/21, 7:10 PM
Man, I read your stories on cyoc when I was like 15 years old. I turned 25 yesterday and I left that site behind a long time ago. This is such a blast from the past.
2/16/21, 7:02 PM
I have always loved the series, so glad that it is back again. I'm so excited for the next chapters!!
Anonymous
2/16/21, 6:44 PM
excellent
2/16/21, 5:59 PM
I hope to see more of Justin too
2/16/21, 5:50 PM
love thus story so much !!! would love to see more nike sneakers in the domination !
2/16/21, 4:06 PM
Well written dumbing down like this is really hot. It's not easy to write plausible though. From a first person you can't be too aware that you are stupid, since you are after all stupid. It has to come in the effects on the surrounding. Like you try to be subtle, but no one buys it. You make mistakes that should be obvious, and you realize too late. You can't understand jokes or sarcasm or when people play with you.