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2/16/21, 5:50 PM
love thus story so much !!! would love to see more nike sneakers in the domination !
2/16/21, 4:06 PM
Well written dumbing down like this is really hot. It's not easy to write plausible though. From a first person you can't be too aware that you are stupid, since you are after all stupid. It has to come in the effects on the surrounding. Like you try to be subtle, but no one buys it. You make mistakes that should be obvious, and you realize too late. You can't understand jokes or sarcasm or when people play with you.
2/16/21, 3:49 PM
Damn this story is hot. Definitely hope you continue it cause I have questions! haha
Anonymous
2/16/21, 3:31 PM
love this story so much and would love to see a milkman 3
2/16/21, 2:46 PM
Glad you liked it! I intended this story to be a standalone one but I definitely want to explore the world of these characters a little more thoroughly. Since Dylan was the one who was hypnotized, it's hard to know what happened. Other stories will provide more insight into the process. Expect these characters to turn up again!
2/16/21, 1:45 PM
You always write such amazing stories. I remember years ago when you wrote gerrymandering and totally awoke a political kink that I didn't know I had.
Anonymous
2/16/21, 12:14 PM
I keep checking back and rereading the whole series cant wait for the next part. keep up the good work so hot and a great story telling.
2/16/21, 11:48 AM
this is....honestly pretty tame. I'm not sure how "dark" you mean but this is pretty vanilla compare to other bara manga I accidentally encounter. but homestly, this is a really good start. You time and pace the conversion quite well. and already, POC of color from the start. That's a bonus.
Steve
2/16/21, 10:23 AM
very well written and highly erotic.
2/16/21, 9:44 AM
yeah i want to know too!