Recent Comments

2/13/21, 12:09 PM
Such a fun and amusing story! I'd love to see a sequel, maybe this time with a bit more blatant eroticism. Maybe the student journalist keeps a personal blog, and in it we find out how the hypnotist triggers him and QB Dave Roth again...
Nov 3, 2019
Martin
2/13/21, 12:08 PM
Why did I just found out about this now? Must have missed it... Anyway, I just had great time on my first playthrough, even when coming out last place :) Looking forward to another try! Very well done!
Martin
2/13/21, 11:02 AM
VERY hot! I love how you constructed this story. Don't mind if not everyone appreciates every aspect. That's just the way it! Please keep up writing hot stories like this one!
2/13/21, 10:50 AM
Hot story! Thanks!
2/13/21, 10:34 AM
Great transformations!
2/13/21, 8:55 AM
Superb story! I loved this series, was glad to see it revived, and after re-reading once again I do hope to see a continuation from here! excellent descriptions of fisting, just instantly erotic for me. Would love more time in Chuck's mind-fucked head in his post-afterglow!
IvorySilk
2/13/21, 5:59 AM
I forgot to leave a comment here, but I really liked this one. It's clever, the perspective you took Milo being the narrator, and his sort of blasé attitude telling the story. Really emphasised how dominated he was. The subtle seduction other commented one was also a nice touch. Kudos!
2/13/21, 4:05 AM
glad you are enjoying i wanted the turn of David to be a slow burn and subtle as opposed to the quick and direct takedown Kevin had in the first chapter.
giveintothemusk
2/13/21, 3:38 AM
Loooove this series! Nice show burn . Good transformations. Can't wait for more!
Teddybear91
2/13/21, 3:32 AM
Love the idea to this, and it was loaded with excellent suspense and beautiful imagery. I could really see it in my mind. I wish you'd given some attention to the growth of his butt, though. A fat guy like that should have an ass to match--but that's just my opinion. Great work!