Recent Comments

2/13/21, 8:55 AM
Superb story! I loved this series, was glad to see it revived, and after re-reading once again I do hope to see a continuation from here! excellent descriptions of fisting, just instantly erotic for me. Would love more time in Chuck's mind-fucked head in his post-afterglow!
IvorySilk
2/13/21, 5:59 AM
I forgot to leave a comment here, but I really liked this one. It's clever, the perspective you took Milo being the narrator, and his sort of blasé attitude telling the story. Really emphasised how dominated he was. The subtle seduction other commented one was also a nice touch. Kudos!
2/13/21, 4:05 AM
glad you are enjoying i wanted the turn of David to be a slow burn and subtle as opposed to the quick and direct takedown Kevin had in the first chapter.
giveintothemusk
2/13/21, 3:38 AM
Loooove this series! Nice show burn . Good transformations. Can't wait for more!
Teddybear91
2/13/21, 3:32 AM
Love the idea to this, and it was loaded with excellent suspense and beautiful imagery. I could really see it in my mind. I wish you'd given some attention to the growth of his butt, though. A fat guy like that should have an ass to match--but that's just my opinion. Great work!
2/13/21, 3:32 AM
need more of this
2/13/21, 2:55 AM
Glad to you see you writing again. I love your stories and they are a nice fun distraction from the stress of my work day and school.
2/13/21, 2:18 AM
Excelent start, waiting for the next chapter
2/13/21, 12:48 AM
WOOF!
Ravenclaw
2/13/21, 12:46 AM
Was good, great until it got to the slave part. Would have preferred anything except that. But still enjoyed it.