Recent Comments

2/13/21, 4:05 AM
glad you are enjoying i wanted the turn of David to be a slow burn and subtle as opposed to the quick and direct takedown Kevin had in the first chapter.
giveintothemusk
2/13/21, 3:38 AM
Loooove this series! Nice show burn . Good transformations. Can't wait for more!
Teddybear91
2/13/21, 3:32 AM
Love the idea to this, and it was loaded with excellent suspense and beautiful imagery. I could really see it in my mind. I wish you'd given some attention to the growth of his butt, though. A fat guy like that should have an ass to match--but that's just my opinion. Great work!
2/13/21, 3:32 AM
need more of this
2/13/21, 2:55 AM
Glad to you see you writing again. I love your stories and they are a nice fun distraction from the stress of my work day and school.
2/13/21, 2:18 AM
Excelent start, waiting for the next chapter
2/13/21, 12:48 AM
WOOF!
Ravenclaw
2/13/21, 12:46 AM
Was good, great until it got to the slave part. Would have preferred anything except that. But still enjoyed it.
MadDonald
2/12/21, 10:06 PM
You have really became one of my favorite writers <3
2/12/21, 9:44 PM
Fuuuck ! Breath taking man!!****