Recent Comments

2/9/21, 8:49 PM
really awsome start to the story, looking forward to the next chapter.
2/9/21, 8:34 PM
Love this. Can't wait to read more. Please continue.
nycboot
2/9/21, 8:28 PM
Interesting start. Like a "message movie" I consider this a "political story" in that the point seems to be less about sex or mind control but more about teaching tolerance of gayness. Your writing makes readers want to strongly empathize with Vince so I'm all for him screwing his dad both in mind and in body. But to keep that empathy don't make him a crazed son seeking ultimate revenge. Make his actions and thoughts just enough to make his father 1) accept gayness and 2) be a real father and support his son to the max.
2/9/21, 8:14 PM
This is maybe my favorite story ever. Would LOVE another like it.
2/9/21, 8:05 PM
hotttttt, please do more to this, it's soooo hot.
2/9/21, 8:05 PM
Very well written ! The backstory and the motivation of the main character is very well established. looking forward to more chapters !
Feb 7, 2021
2/9/21, 8:05 PM
excellent. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.
2/9/21, 6:22 PM
i came a lot of times. this is just do good.
Anonymous
2/9/21, 6:22 PM
I Like the start, I hope things keep going well
Feb 8, 2021
Anonymous
2/9/21, 6:00 PM
Super sexy!!!! Short & sweet