Recent Comments

2/8/21, 2:53 PM
Glad to read another chapter from this story. :)
Cracker
2/8/21, 2:46 PM
Thanks. Actually I don't pay heed to the tagging 1st, 2nd. 3rd...system when hitting publish. I simply know you have to indicate it so I hit whatever. I figure, if you are fixated on its tags, you are missing the story's intended "effects". :)
Feb 8, 2021
2/8/21, 1:11 PM
👏 GOOD STORY. I hope that you can continue this with also a FEET FETISH DOMINATION. Bye 👋
Bimarguy
2/8/21, 12:55 PM
great story , anyone want to go to Mars
Nov 26, 2019
Drew
2/8/21, 11:20 AM
the story is hot
2/8/21, 11:11 AM
Love it how the Master's programming has overriden his relationship with his b/f and turning him into a Alpha
2/8/21, 9:46 AM
Really enjoying this, hope there's more to come!
2/8/21, 8:26 AM
My my, I so want more daddies to be on the harem <3
Feb 7, 2021
2/8/21, 5:03 AM
I appreciate what you're trying to do here, starting this alien abduction story *in medias res* with no explanation of who the mindwiped man and boy are. However, it just didn't quite work for me erotically, because the characters were such blanks, I couldn't get invested in their mind control or sex scene. And like nycboot, I didn't really understand the function of the twist at the end; as a reader, it just didn't matter much to me whether the incest was between uncle and nephew or biological father and son who'd always interacted as uncle and nephew. For me, the story would have worked a lot better if you'd allowed the boy a few flashes of awareness and memory in the beginning, where he recognizes his uncle before being completely mindwiped by the aliens.