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Feb 7, 2021
2/8/21, 5:03 AM
I appreciate what you're trying to do here, starting this alien abduction story *in medias res* with no explanation of who the mindwiped man and boy are. However, it just didn't quite work for me erotically, because the characters were such blanks, I couldn't get invested in their mind control or sex scene. And like nycboot, I didn't really understand the function of the twist at the end; as a reader, it just didn't matter much to me whether the incest was between uncle and nephew or biological father and son who'd always interacted as uncle and nephew. For me, the story would have worked a lot better if you'd allowed the boy a few flashes of awareness and memory in the beginning, where he recognizes his uncle before being completely mindwiped by the aliens.
Feb 7, 2021
2/8/21, 4:59 AM
interesting
Anonymous
2/8/21, 4:35 AM
Glad to see this story continue! Hoping to get to see some action with the rest of the team soon.
2/8/21, 4:03 AM
Oh shit! What a cliff hanger!
2/8/21, 3:55 AM
WOW! Keep it coming. Thank you!
2/8/21, 1:57 AM
Very hot beginning! I look forward to where you take this next.
Anonymous
2/8/21, 1:57 AM
come back, please!! I love this
Anonymous
2/8/21, 1:40 AM
But what a beautiful story. All the stories from here on should be as beautiful and loving as this one. It is a great story of beautiful love.
Anonymous
2/8/21, 1:29 AM
Very beautiful romantic story I wish there were more stories like this of love and full sincerity. I really like this type of stories, I hope I repeat more stories as beautiful as this one of love love love love beautiful and beautiful because they inspire a lot, a lot and rejoice. It is a very beautiful story.