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Panda
2/2/25, 1:03 PM
Thank you for much for this story! Feeling motivated to push forward into a proper leather man!
2/2/25, 10:40 AM
YOOOOO? Bottom converting a straight guy into his puppy dog himbo top??? LET’S GOOOO, hope you continue this!
2/2/25, 2:27 AM
Sweet. Adorable. Messy. And a quintessential teenage romance that screams, 'I don't know what I'm doing, but I want it.' It was acute and innocent way to show their feelings. But how long will those feelings last with that cliffhanger? And I really enjoy the hints of layered and conflicting ambitions that are bubbling up over time. It keeps me wondering who is going to to backstab who and when?

2/2/25, 10:30 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thank you very much! Yes, that's exactly what I was hoping for with these two! As for where things might be going for them,... _who can say?_
2/2/25, 9:52 AM
Wow great start! Look forwarding got seeing this story get deeper.. and hopefully longer!
2/1/25, 7:23 PM
Great story! I can't wait to read more of your work!

2/2/25, 9:47 AM
@[Taylor](/user/show/2690062) Thank you lots ! I'm open to suggestions since I'm really just a beginner 🙏
2/2/25, 9:06 AM
I liked the basic gist of the story, but personally found it too short and a bit cursory.
Oct 20, 2012
2/2/25, 8:49 AM
i love this story! There is an enthralling sense of unexplainable mystery and power both in the place and in Sensei himself. Details of he boy's training and seduction were vague, almost supernatural, like both the Sensei, his home, and his pets. i love the pleasure and relaxation of hypnosis and enjoy learning more about the details of hypnosis and the effects it can have on the mind and the body. For that reason i normally like the descriptions of the process to be quite detailed and realistic. This story did not do that, but there was enough detail to created a strong atmosphere of domination, control, and submission. i love diversity and the richness of different ethnicities, cultures, and customs. It makes life that much more varied and interesting. That the sensei was Japanese and insisted on Timothy's learning his customs, including obedience and respect of his sensai made the story rather exotic, fantastic and super hot!
2/2/25, 8:09 AM
Love it I'd like the idea of a follow up chapter with David in control I doubt Jason could help him become popular if he was he could already be popular. As it send David is in complete control and Jason is lifeless. Maybe making Jason unpopular with his methods and end it with him getting bored only to end with him starting to eye his next target at least to end the story. You could fill in with chapters of him playing with him.
2/2/25, 7:13 AM
I hope you write more stories in this universe.
2/2/25, 4:58 AM
Colossal balls are awesome!