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Anonymous
2/8/21, 1:40 AM
But what a beautiful story. All the stories from here on should be as beautiful and loving as this one. It is a great story of beautiful love.
Anonymous
2/8/21, 1:29 AM
Very beautiful romantic story I wish there were more stories like this of love and full sincerity. I really like this type of stories, I hope I repeat more stories as beautiful as this one of love love love love beautiful and beautiful because they inspire a lot, a lot and rejoice. It is a very beautiful story.
Anonymous
2/8/21, 1:26 AM
Muy bonita historia romantica ojala hubiera mas historias como esta de amor y de sinceridad plena. Me gusta mucho este tipo de historias ojala reitero se publicaran mas historias tan bellas como esta de amor amor amor amor bello y bonito porque inspiran muchisimo muchisimo y regocijan. En verdad es una historia muy hermosa.
Joe
2/8/21, 12:37 AM
dude! this could not be any better! what an awesome story! thank you!
2/8/21, 12:32 AM
nice work
Anonymous
2/7/21, 11:54 PM
Awesome! Exactly what I was hoping for!
Feb 7, 2021
2/7/21, 11:40 PM
Thanks for the feedback so far, guys. Regarding your response nycboot, my intent was to keep the man’s identity ambiguous: he could be the boy's father or his uncle. The dialogue at the end was in service to that. You'll notice they're both described as identical twins, both experienced ringing sensations, etc... I've also added some edits for further context.
2/7/21, 11:29 PM
Yesss can't wait for the third part!
Feb 7, 2021
2/7/21, 11:26 PM
Outstanding writing!
2/7/21, 9:24 PM
This is a really good start to a bigger story. The characters and setting are well fleshed out while also leaving enough room for future writers to interpret how ever they see fit, so over all, very well written. Thinking about writing a chapter myself. With that being said, I do have a couple of questions I'd like to ask to get some ideas on how I want to continue the story, when I manage to find the time to write. First off, when coming up with the M.E.D.S device did you have any limitations in mind for what it can/can't do? Specifically the physical button, would Ben be able to change the teachers' hair color and length, make him younger, add extra limbs; or is he only able to make more realistic changes like gain 6 bls of muscle in a single week, increase skin sensitivity, or loose any/all bladder control? Last question, is the main setting of this story in high school or college?