Recent Comments

2/6/21, 11:46 PM
Nice work. Thanks for sharing it with us!
2/6/21, 10:36 PM
This was a lot of fun. Beat-for-beat, it followed the formula very well. My only criticism is with the dog. The poor thing disappears about halfway through the story. It was like she got in the way of what the author wanted to do and he sent her packing! I think the inference is that the dog (on some level) understood what was happening to the protagonist and set out to find a better opportunity, but I still didn't dig it. I gotta tell ya, I'd be upset with my dogs if they just split while I was in the middle of an alien transformation! After all that kibble! Good job, man! Anxious to read more.
2/6/21, 8:38 PM
dick move Tiny, Dick move
2/6/21, 7:21 PM
thanks GM for the installment it's all coming together and I can't wait to see how you bring the final chapters together relz.
2/6/21, 7:09 PM
again love
boi98229
2/6/21, 6:57 PM
Sweet. Nice that Mattie finally found someone who was caring, supportive, and gay!
2/6/21, 6:47 PM
hot story! hope that theres more to come!
boi98229
2/6/21, 6:42 PM
Nice plot setup and character development. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks!
Jul 2, 2020
2/6/21, 6:29 PM
I just love everything you write.
Anonymous
2/6/21, 6:20 PM
good characters, great start!