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2/5/21, 2:24 PM
love it!
Anonymous
2/5/21, 12:18 PM
I loved this. Please make more
Mar 19, 2013
Scott
2/5/21, 10:27 AM
shame more of this story never cane along. its a hot theme. we done.
2/5/21, 9:57 AM
Very good thanks - and a great ending!
2/5/21, 7:34 AM
This was difficult to read, it kept changing perspectives without warning, and I gave up halfway through. I became too confused as to which was Danny-turned-into-Greg and which was Greg-turned-into-Danny. This seems like a decent first draft, the body-swap idea is fascinating, but it definitely needs some thorough editing.
Kent
2/5/21, 7:16 AM
more pleaseeee
Dom
2/5/21, 5:53 AM
Damn this is hot, your writing really captures all the things you wanna hear
2/5/21, 4:58 AM
Thanks. I wasn't really sure how this one would turn out but I liked the idea of being in someones head as they were on the journey. The first section actually came to me while I was half alseep so seemed right to start there.
2/5/21, 3:06 AM
Really enjoyed the story, and hoping to see a follow-up in the same universe. Taking the time to lay out that lore might as well use it to show some other sides of the world. Shared this with a few friends that really enjoyed it. Some questions we had were about the logistics. Do they wear out, can they be used up? Do they die? Hope to see some of this in the future. Personal highlight for me was the junior manager at the marketing company. Him being an ass and showing the bad end that could be in store. And being so full of himself that he asks if he wants the change to be permanent.
giveintothemusk
2/5/21, 2:19 AM
So sad this never continued