Recent Comments

2/2/21, 6:20 PM
for a first effort you did really well and constructed an excellent story. as far as writing as a non English speaking person, other then a few extremely minor syntax errors.... some repeated words, all of which were very rare.... no one will care as the story far surpasses any small errors.
Zac
2/2/21, 6:17 PM
Hot story, bro!
2/2/21, 6:14 PM
@Jonanator Thanks man! I've appreciated all of your comments :D
2/2/21, 6:05 PM
I like Cartoon Aaron, and although I'm not a big fan of anthro, it was fun to imagin him donkified. I agree, would be fun if Aaron get revenge, but things go unexpected. I'd love if both of them end up cartoonish and weird.
2/2/21, 5:07 PM
Thanks guys! One of the best stories? You're way to kind haha. 😊
2/2/21, 3:12 PM
Good solid transformation story! I especially liked the detail with the cock ring sealing the transformation, though it would have been cool if you'd shown John and Chad wearing similar cock rings. There were also some typos and some places where the word choice seemed a little off; for instance, it was odd seeing a straight guy like the narrator describe John as "one of the hunkiest dudes" and "the hunk." Overall, however, I thought this was a great first effort!
2/2/21, 1:33 PM
I usually don't read #political stories, but I like your stories and this is also a great one.
2/2/21, 1:11 PM
Excellent as always! Personal preference, but i love your stories when there is slightly more push back/me against the hypnosis involved but thats just me. Either way we should all be so Chad...i mean lucky.
2/2/21, 12:59 PM
holy mystics scary and erotic